siyudad
09/1/08*
i.
some days he is the broken seashell and
he holds himself to his own ear to better hear the ocean tremble.
some days
he is torn apart by sharks and machines
while bystanders on shore capture him
with waterlogged cameras.
ii.
he’s afraid of dripping saltwater
on his old brown notes about her.
iii.
her life is of redundancies and
pseudo-orgasms
iv.
he drank the night away alone
in a table for two,
he sounds like typewriters,
looks like melting snow
v.
she’s been watching movies about
happiness, misspelling the word
in her head… happypenis
vi.
they’re going to get a room after
he hails a taxicab
vii.
his uniform, ironed by his beloved wife
shoes, shone by the city rain
iloilo city sunset trapped by: Vansen
When You Walk Around the City- Boy in the Bubble
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7 tables in a kapehan: a tanned guy with shell anklet and a guitar case, a couple studying Medicine books, an aged woman with red hot lipstick and red shoes, weird-dressed guy with tunnels, guesswho, PDAing lovers, the catnapping sekyu. dunkin donuts, corner plazoleta gay. 2am.
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Previous Comments
hays… great job as usual!
the similes are just bloody great! natawa ako dun sa part na na-mispelled niya yung happiness. ahhee!
And I adore you!:)
Sana mahila natin minsan si Pambie para makapagkape tayong tatlo.
(So I’ll finally meet you is the underlying motive. Nyaha.:D)
Posted by Shirley at September 1, 2008, 10:14 pmlove the pic of iloilo city skyline
remember that dunkin donuts tin across mcdonalds here in fuente, cebu where we met along with yo, dan and tey? mgtambay man pud ni yo didto , ul see us as the “PDAing lovers”, hehe, ^_^..
Posted by akosikai at September 3, 2008, 3:42 am@opismeyt: salamat bro. kung magdelete man ko, online lang man na. todohan ko dayun nga bura sa dulunggan mo.
@ron: i wish you happypenis
@shirley: tameme ako. i’ll add u up ha, that the rest of my kaabyanans will discover your magic.
magkita tayo sa kasal ni pamela.
@caryn: thanks amiga
@kai: mao ba? exempted lang mo kay one of my fave labtims man mo. oi kai, tingale naa ko diha by november, nonon (lifelikepepe.blogspot.com) and another friend from bacolod ug ako, naa mi’y ipasa sa exhibit diha.
Posted by modernpatadyong at September 3, 2008, 6:01 pmThis is another remarkable element of your goddamn beautiful poetry. You mix the beauty of sentiments and the ass-kicking wits. We are the same, there is Starbucks near my pad and I stay there for hours just thinking of people and writing about what’s running on their heads. Rock on ass!!
Posted by maurya at September 4, 2008, 10:11 am@maurya: i might bloat my head and vomit all the humility because of you. hahaha. btw- how’s that guy you meet there?
two of my dearest friends, i met there. it’s actually a hold-up-prone zone.






so yer back lampagak! hahaha! great great little poems. paborito ko ang 1st for the description kag ang 5th kay parte sa imo
you are one hell of a disjointed genius. di na magdelete ha.
Posted by officem8 at September 1, 2008, 12:54 pm